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The Waterfall Warrior, Part 1

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We all know Aqua and Lola Commander, right? The most fastest sisters on all of Slugterra? Well have you heard about there past? I guess not... In this story tells you all about The Commander Sister's past///Today was the day the war between the Commanders and the Flames, everyone was getting stacked with armor and weapons but two certain people didn't, It was the Commander Sisters. They didn't care much about the War expect Aqua, she had been training to once be a warrior. "Why did a war start now?! UGH!" Lola said, moaning. "Its not our fault, our recitatives have been fighting for years with the Flames, just don't worry about it that much" Aqua said, as she continued training. Lola rolled her eyes "OK..." She said, but suddenly she heard gun shooting. "Huh?! What was that?!" Aqua said, confused. "That was gun shooting" Lola replied. "Oh. Anyways I'm gonna go out there!" Aqua said as she loaded her guns but when she got out of there house she saw her mother die in front of her... She fell on her knees and broke into tears. "NOOOOO!!!" She yelled out. Then it started to rain and Lola suddenly heard her voice and came out to see there own mother dead, right in front of there eyes... She saw the one who shot her with a riffle, It was Starlan Flame, Star's mother. "YOU SLUGGING CORRUPTED BITCH!!!" Lola yelled out, angrily at Starlan. That made the Commander Sisters so angry, yet sad they brought out a tank but there looks changed. Aqua had bright white skin, with fiery like hair while Lola's skin was white to but had icy hair but her hands where as cold as ice. "When you mess with a Commander... You mess with all of us..." Aqua said, while she hopped in the tank with other Commander's surrounding it, the Flames where in total shock so they ran away to the fire palace. Aqua and Lola turned back to normal but felt dizzy and hurt then they collapsed to the ground. There father picked them up and went to the hidden ocean under there house. "D....ad..." Aqua spoke weakly. "Wh...at... is... happ....ening...?" Lola said, weakly as well. Her father had tears in his eyes "Shhh, sweetie... Your gonna be fine" He spoke to them, sadly.
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MOREEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!! IT LEFT ME IN SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!